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Monday, November 14, 2011

A creative writing assignment by the DeRango girls

Take 1

The fox was strolling through his lovely life with his sharp teeth. After an hour his finger was sore. He cooked a sausage in his tepee with wax attached in his ear. His eyes flashed on a twisted circle, within it was a bear bathing in the river and walking down a hill in the hot air facing a storm.Opening a flap he arrived in the tepee to see fox and hear tiger music. An owl hooted in the moon, a spark in the sky saw the storm begin. The fern grasses twirled and the pale river churned. Foam collections around driftwood and the surging storm saw them both sleeping.

Take 2

Inside my ice cream cone there is my dog Pippy and Mrs.Rodgers my 5th grade teacher. My Mama, daddy, me and Jude. Plus 3 scoops of mint chocolate chip ice cream and my big yellow house. Also all the Harry Potter and Star Wars DVDs. My trampoline is located here with a lead pencil and some flowers. And a swimming pool with rubber ducks and doilies. There is a moon and a sun and fingernails. Happiness and cleaning shampoo are there. And my dog friend Ziggy along with a surfboard along with a memory of myself surfing big waves and plenty of stars.

13 comments:

  1. i miss you hope you have alot of fun Pachia Lee

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  2. what are u doing elyssia

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  3. The Jacaranda trees remind me of Ventura, Terri has some of these trees on the street behind her house. My goodness you are all learning a lot of history about OZ, my favorite subject. Are you going to have a Thanksgiving celebration there? Blessings Aunt Claire

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  4. What fantastic photos! I love the Jacaranda trees. I have it on my PC at work for wallpaper
    I keep changing pictures every couple of days! It's great, everytime I look at it I see something different. I have a relative of Oscar a pink butterfly, haven't decided on a name yet, help me think of one girls.

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  5. Hey DeRangos,

    Love the photos! I hope you're having a really fun time in Australia because when I talked to you last on the phone you were going to leave in less than 2 hours. Leona, your story in the Tape 2 section was very interesting. Sadly, I don't think Pipi will be able to fit in your ice cream cone along with your parents. You'd better find room to fit all those things in, but the DVD's are OK. Best be going. School is tomorrow and so is the never-ending spelling bee. Pretty easy words in my opinion if you study 3 times. Twice with my mom and the other time on my own. Looking forward to hearing from you all soon!

    Kaylie and Annika.

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  6. Hi Jude are you having fun! Jude all those picture's you send to us look great!
    From:Adela

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  7. when are you now jude. by pheng

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  8. Jude I like this story. journie

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  9. Hi! how are you? do you remember Ms.Cole?journie

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  10. Kaylie and Annika, We saw a spelling bee on the news last night. It was of all the schools joining together in hope to get a trophey for their school.
    We are missing you. Jude

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  11. You look like you are having fun!!! Thanks for sharing the wonderful pictures. Sure do miss you!!!

    Take Care
    Love Auntie Bea

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  12. hi Leona, are you guys at the waterfall? Because we see the waterfall in the links. I really miss you a thounsand time and i hope you will come back to school soon. I'm also sorry that i can't write to you a lot lately. I think that we will be a lot happy when you come back to school SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!. :D WE all miss you so much and it is not a lot of fun without you and sorry for the incorrect spelling. will good bye


    sincerely,6B!!!!!!!!!!!

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